Some people think that hosting an international sport event is good for the country. Other think that it is bad. Dicuss both views and state your opinion.

The trend of international
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events
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is rising significantly.
Although
this
shift has positive aspects, the
negartive
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negative
aspects cannot be ignored.
This
essay will explore how the international
sport
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event
affects various
aspect
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aspects
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of a country considering both pros and
crons
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cons
to support my
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. The rapid influx of
world-wide
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sports
event
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events
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imevaitably
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inevitably
causes a variety of problems.
To begin
with,
shortage
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the shortage
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of resources,
such
as accommodation,
food
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and food
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, become more pronounced. It
rises
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raises
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the
difficulities
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difficulties
for
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people. For
an
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example, when these
event
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start
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, automatically the price hike
appear
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where
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many
commondities
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commodities
up
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to the mark.
Moreover
,
this
tent to over the moon when issues arise like transportation,
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and pollutions
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pollutions
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. One of the major negative
aspect
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is
the
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traffic congestion,
for instance
, when a
lange
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large
number of population arrive suddenly, the roads
are become
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become
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more swamped and pollutions occur here and there.
Consequently
, the residents suffer a lot when
this
type of
events
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event
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happen in a certain area. All that being said
that
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, I
donot
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do not
believe that
this
sport
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sports
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event
is
wholly
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negative development. There are numerous amenities that cannot be neglected.
For example
, a lot of
jab
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job
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opportunities create when these
type
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types
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of events come. On top of that, the host country will get a chance to play in
main
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event
which allow them to run one step closer.
On the other
hand
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they will be known and
familier
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familiar
by hosting these events. In my opinion, many of the problems associated with international
sport
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sports events
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event
can be mitigated with proper measures.
However
, if government, business, and
socity
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society
responds
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to
this
challenge properly it can
be bless
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for Individuals
as well as
a country.
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Provide more specific examples to strengthen your arguments.
Strength
The essay presents a balanced view by discussing both the positive and negative aspects of hosting international sports events.
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The conclusion effectively summarizes the main points and offers a personal opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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