The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied bar chart indicates data about the number of global
population
and the
amount
of
invests
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investments
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by area over the
period
. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest proportion of
population
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the population
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includes China.
However
, Rich Asia-Pacific has the lowest number of
population
.
Moreover
, the highest
amount
of
wealth
comprises
of
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apply
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North America.
Whilst
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apply
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, India
does
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has
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not
contribute
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contributed
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any global
invest
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investment
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over the whole time. The
percentage
of global
wealth
is just over a third at 34% in North America, (which is the highest
amount
of
wealth
over the
period
) just ahead of the proportion of world investment in Europe at precisely 30%.
Furthermore
, the
percentage
of
population
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the population
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is approximately a quarter at 24% in China. (which is the highest
amount
of
population
over the whole year).
In contrast
, the
percentage
of global richness is nearly 1% in
india
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India
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and Africa. (which
are
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is
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the lowest
amount
of world
wealth
over the
period
).
Similarly
, the number of
crwod
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crowd
in North America is slightly as many as in Rich-Asia Pacific at 6% and 5%, respectively. (which are the lowest
percentage
of
population
over the
period
).
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, amount, period, wealth, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • chart
  • global population
  • distribution of wealth
  • percentages
  • region
  • Asia
  • Africa
  • Europe
  • North America
  • South America
  • Oceania
  • disparity
  • account for
  • follow
  • despite
  • vary
  • demonstrate
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