The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012 You should write at least 150 words.
The chart presents the amount of export between Australia and four countries from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
, by the year 2012, China is the country with the highest percentage of Australian sales, with Japan coming in second. Conversely
, India
has consistently the lowest number of exports
from Australia.
Japan experienced a sharp decrease in trade between the years 1995 and 2000. However
, its percentage in exports
is still significantly higher compared to the US and India
. In contrast
, China had a significant rise in numbers from the year 2000 and has continuously risen since then
.
The US and India
have both the lowest percentage of exports
, both approximately reaching the same numbers in 2012. Although
the US had moderately high numbers in 1990, it began steadily falling to percentages below ten percent
in 2000. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, India
's exports
have been increasing in the same year but still have a marked gap between Japan and China.Submitted by erickacasandra.abas on
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