The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, ad make compaiosons where relevant

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, ad make compaiosons where relevant
The diagram illustrates a blueprint of a local
library
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present looks and how it was planned 20 years ago.
Overall
, there
is
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are
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no similarities
exist
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that exist
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now as structured around two decades ago, but there's
a
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entrance
can
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be seen by looking at the framework, which was located
on
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in
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south
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the south
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part of the
library
. In the past as planned, there
was
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two tables in the middle of the
library
. On the south, to that
place
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an adult non-fiction
books
collection
as well as
on the opposite adult fiction
books
were available as well. In the northwest, media and computer games were available and
on
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in
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the northeast, A collection of children's
books
can be found as well. A reading room
located
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on the southwest and an enquiry desk was on the southeast. In the present time,
middle
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of the
library
is empty, reference
books
can be found on the west. In the east part of the
library
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library,
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we can see that there is a variety of
service
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services
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and
collection
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collections
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available at the moment.
Moreover
, on the
southwest
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southwest,
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there is a computer room and
in
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on
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the
opposite
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opposite,
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a cafe exists now, children's fiction
books
with storytelling events
surrounded
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are surrounded
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by
sofa
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a sofa
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is can be found
at
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in
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the northwest part of the
library
. In the northeast, we can see a lecture room.
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