The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the architecture of an industrial
area
in the town of Norbiton and how
this
area
will be changed in the future.
Overall
, the
area
is set to undergo major changes, transforming from an industrial zone to a residential neighbourhood and it can be clearly seen that a number of facilities will be added to the town. The current
area
figure shows that there is only one square in the heart of the industrial
area
which is surrounded by factories. Regarding the future layout, a school, a medical centre, a playground, shops, and a number of housing will replaced and be available for the workers and their families in the industrial
area
.
Moreover
, a new road will be constructed to pass by the river which is in the north of the layout and
helps
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a new house to be reachable.
Furthermore
, the road from town to the industrial
area
, which is in the south of the
area
, will see a new square which connects the road to the
area
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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