the diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. summarize the information by reporting main features

the diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. summarize the information by reporting main features
The diagram illustrates the circular process of biofuel production. The process
consist
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of seven stages, starting with the
plants
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growth and culminating with the addition of microbes.
Initially
, sunlight and carbon dioxide,
emissioned
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emissions
emission
from cars,
loories
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lorries
and planes, are absorbed by
plants
. These sources
provided
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the needed energy for
plants
and
trees
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growth, after which, these
plants
are mechanically
harvestednand
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harvested
and processed in two
stagespreprocessed
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stages
. The first pre-processing stage takes place on the field, where twigs and other parts of the
plants
are shredded and cellulose is extracted. Afterwards, the cellulose is transferred to laboratories, where scientists process them and extract sugar from them. In the next
satge
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stage
, the final product, namely ethanol, is produced as microbes are added to sugars.
This
chemical is used as a fuel in different vehicles and produces carbon dioxide as it is burned, making up for one of the plant's energy sources.
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