The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents the number of sold
coffee
, tea
, pastries
and sandwiches in a coffee
shop inside an office. This
includes data from a usual weekday.
Overall
, the highest and lowest sales
differ depending on the time
on a usual weekday. However
, it is noticeable that coffee
and pastries
are mostly sold in four different time
ranges.
In detail, pastries
are usually in demand from 7:30-10:30 with the highest sales
of 275. Also
, coffee
follows with only a 10 difference from pastries
. People purchase 110 tea
from Fix the agreement mistake
teas
this
shop and
Correct word choice
apply
this
is more than twice the number of purchased sandwichesCorrect pronoun usage
which
in
. Change preposition
apply
This
is considered the lowest sale during that time
. On contrary
to the previous hours, from 10:30-14:30, sandwiches have the highest Change preposition
Contrary
sales
at 200. This
is four times higher the sales
of tea
during this
time
.
Furthermore
, during 14:30-17:30, similar to the initial 3 hours, pastries
are the highest with 150 sales
which is closely followed by 145 coffee
sales
. Additionally
, in this
hour, the lowest sales
are tea
products with only 35. Just like 10:30-2:30, coffee
has the most sales
at 200 and the least are teas with only 75.Submitted by cng123 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, pastries, sales, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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