The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents the number of sold
coffee
, Use synonyms
tea
, Use synonyms
pastries
and sandwiches in a Use synonyms
coffee
shop inside an office. Use synonyms
This
includes data from a usual weekday.
Linking Words
Overall
, the highest and lowest Linking Words
sales
differ depending on the Use synonyms
time
on a usual weekday. Use synonyms
However
, it is noticeable that Linking Words
coffee
and Use synonyms
pastries
are mostly sold in four different Use synonyms
time
ranges.
In detail, Use synonyms
pastries
are usually in demand from 7:30-10:30 with the highest Use synonyms
sales
of 275. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
coffee
follows with only a 10 difference from Use synonyms
pastries
. People purchase 110 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
tea
from Fix the agreement mistake
teas
this
shop Linking Words
and
Correct word choice
apply
Linking Words
this
is more than twice the number of purchased sandwichesCorrect pronoun usage
which
in
. Change preposition
apply
This
is considered the lowest sale during that Linking Words
time
. Use synonyms
On contrary
to the previous hours, from 10:30-14:30, sandwiches have the highest Change preposition
Contrary
sales
at 200. Use synonyms
This
is four times higher the Linking Words
sales
of Use synonyms
tea
during Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
time
.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, during 14:30-17:30, similar to the initial 3 hours, Linking Words
pastries
are the highest with 150 Use synonyms
sales
which is closely followed by 145 Use synonyms
coffee
Use synonyms
sales
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, in Linking Words
this
hour, the lowest Linking Words
sales
are Use synonyms
tea
products with only 35. Just like 10:30-2:30, Use synonyms
coffee
has the most Use synonyms
sales
at 200 and the least are teas with only 75.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, pastries, sales, time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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