The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table presents the number of sold
coffee
,
tea
,
pastries
and sandwiches in a
coffee
shop inside an office.
This
includes data from a usual weekday.
Overall
, the highest and lowest
sales
differ depending on the
time
on a usual weekday.
However
, it is noticeable that
coffee
and
pastries
are mostly sold in four different
time
ranges. In detail,
pastries
are usually in demand from 7:30-10:30 with the highest
sales
of 275.
Also
,
coffee
follows with only a 10 difference from
pastries
. People purchase 110
tea
Fix the agreement mistake
teas
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from
this
shop
and
Correct word choice
apply
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this
Correct pronoun usage
which
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is more than twice the number of purchased sandwiches
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
.
This
is considered the lowest sale during that
time
.
On contrary
Change preposition
Contrary
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to the previous hours, from 10:30-14:30, sandwiches have the highest
sales
at 200.
This
is four times higher the
sales
of
tea
during
this
time
.
Furthermore
, during 14:30-17:30, similar to the initial 3 hours,
pastries
are the highest with 150
sales
which is closely followed by 145
coffee
sales
.
Additionally
, in
this
hour, the lowest
sales
are
tea
products with only 35. Just like 10:30-2:30,
coffee
has the most
sales
at 200 and the least are teas with only 75.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, pastries, sales, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • peak hours
  • trough in sales
  • high consumer demand
  • lunchtime surge
  • light meals
  • caffeine boost
  • sustained interest
  • fluctuate
  • comparison of products
  • typical weekday
  • busiest period
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