The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table presents the number of sold
coffee
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,
tea
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,
pastries
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and sandwiches in a
coffee
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shop inside an office.
This
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includes data from a usual weekday.
Overall
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, the highest and lowest
sales
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differ depending on the
time
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on a usual weekday.
However
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, it is noticeable that
coffee
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and
pastries
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are mostly sold in four different
time
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ranges. In detail,
pastries
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are usually in demand from 7:30-10:30 with the highest
sales
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of 275.
Also
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,
coffee
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follows with only a 10 difference from
pastries
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. People purchase 110
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tea
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teas
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from
this
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shop
and
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apply
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this
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which
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is more than twice the number of purchased sandwiches
in
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apply
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.
This
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is considered the lowest sale during that
time
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.
On contrary
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to the previous hours, from 10:30-14:30, sandwiches have the highest
sales
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at 200.
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is four times higher the
sales
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of
tea
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during
this
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time
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.
Furthermore
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, during 14:30-17:30, similar to the initial 3 hours,
pastries
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are the highest with 150
sales
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which is closely followed by 145
coffee
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sales
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.
Additionally
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, in
this
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hour, the lowest
sales
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are
tea
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products with only 35. Just like 10:30-2:30,
coffee
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has the most
sales
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at 200 and the least are teas with only 75.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea, pastries, sales, time with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • peak hours
  • trough in sales
  • high consumer demand
  • lunchtime surge
  • light meals
  • caffeine boost
  • sustained interest
  • fluctuate
  • comparison of products
  • typical weekday
  • busiest period
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