The charts below show the main reasons workers chose to work at home, and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2005.

The charts below show the main reasons workers chose to work at home, and the hours males and females worked at home for the year 2005.
The first diagram illustrates the reasons
men
and women chose to work at
home
in 2005.
Overall
, running their own businesses was the main reason for both
males
and
females
(69% and 65% respectively).
In contrast
, approximately a quarter of
males
put flexibility as a reason, which was twice as high as the female responses (26% and 12% respectively). For childcare, the pattern was different again with almost a quarter of
females
giving
this
reason compared to very few
males
(5%) The second diagram shows the
hours
men
and women worked at
home
in 2005. The vast
maiority
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majority
of
males
worked over _31
hours
per week (82%) contrasting with a minority of
females
(5%) doing similar
hours
.
This
pattern is reversed when examining the under ten
hours
category with almost
three quarters
Add a hyphen
three-quarters
show examples
of
females
working
this
amount compared to only 2% of
males
. The 10-30
hours
per week category shows fewer marked differences.
To sum up
, it can be seen that
men
and women do not always give the same reasons for
home
working and,
In_general
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in general
,
men
work longer
hours
at
home
.
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