The table below gives information about rail transport in for countries in 2007. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features abd make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides data on rail transport in four countries—Malaysia,
Canada
, China
, and the UAE—in 2007, showing the number of users, passenger kilometers
per head, and cargo carried.
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kilometres
Overall
, China
had the highest number of rail users at 27 million
, while
Canada
had the fewest at 0.3 million
. Malaysia and the UAE had similar figures, with 5.9 million
and 5.5 million
users, respectively.
In terms of passenger kilometers
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kilometres
China
led with 1,980, indicating a high level of rail usage per person. The UAE and Malaysia had similar numbers, at 780 and 770, while
Canada
had the lowest at just 80.
Regarding cargo, Canada
transported the most, with 28.20 billion tons, followed by China
at 23.01 billion tons. Malaysia and the UAE had comparable cargo volumes, carrying 22.2 and 21.9 billion tons, respectively.Submitted by daliaakram35 on
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