The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The data gathered from a study on the purchasing and drinking patterns of
people
in five Australian cities during the past four weeks is shown in the bar graph.
Overall
, more people
went to cafes for tea or coffee
than purchased fresh or instant coffee
in every city save
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Adelaide
. In Adelaide
, purchasing instant coffee
and visiting a café were about equally frequent.
While
slightly under half of people
in Adelaide
went to a café for coffee
or tea, the majority of people
in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, and Brisbane—roughly 64, 63, 62, and 55 percent
, respectively—did so. Change the spelling
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Additionally
, about half of the people
in these five cities bought instant coffee
; in Hobart and Brisbane, that number was close to 55%.
In contrast
, the percentage of individuals who purchased fresh coffee
was never as high as 45% in any of the five cities; people
in Adelaide
and Brisbane, at around 35% each, were less inclined to do so than those in the other three.Submitted by dnm.best on
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