The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The data gathered from a study on the purchasing and drinking patterns of
people
in five Australian cities during the past four weeks is shown in the bar graph.
Overall
, more
people
went to cafes for tea or
coffee
than purchased fresh or instant
coffee
in every city
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Adelaide
. In
Adelaide
, purchasing instant
coffee
and visiting a café were about equally frequent.
While
slightly under half of
people
in
Adelaide
went to a café for
coffee
or tea, the majority of
people
in Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, and Brisbane—roughly 64, 63, 62, and 55
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, respectively—did so.
Additionally
, about half of the
people
in these five cities bought instant
coffee
; in Hobart and Brisbane, that number was close to 55%.
In contrast
, the percentage of individuals who purchased fresh
coffee
was never as high as 45% in any of the five cities;
people
in
Adelaide
and Brisbane, at around 35% each, were less inclined to do so than those in the other three.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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