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Question 3 The maps below show Huntingdon as it is now, and how it will change in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main, and make comparisons where relevant.

Question 3 The maps below show Huntingdon as it is now, and how it will change in the future. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictures show current and proposed
change
Fix the agreement mistake
changes
show examples
 for Huntington.
Currently
Add a comma
Currently,
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 the area is dominated by
A14
Correct article usage
the A14
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highway
while
 the initiated improvement will bring out several changes. The first major development is for the redirection of
A14
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the A14
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highway
 to the south of
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the A1
show examples
highway
.
This
 lane is
also
 altered by its additional way to the ring road, mainly to boost its connectivity to the town square.
Moreover
, other
altercation
Fix the agreement mistake
altercations
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 could
also
been
Change the verb form
be
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 seen
from
Change preposition
in
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 the new plan for
the
Correct article usage
apply
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Brampton Road. It is no longer connected to
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the A1
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highway
 on its west end in order to ease its traffic.
However
, there will be a roundabout
nearby
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near
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 the railway station, so they still have
an
Remove the article
apply
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access to
A1
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the A1
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highway
, albeit it is
further
.
Rephrase
away.
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In addition
, the railway will
also
 be improved as it will be connected to the Industrial estate, formerly
know
Change the form of the verb
known
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 as the airfield.
Lastly
, it is worth
to mention
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mentioning
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 that there will be a modification of
A1
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the A1
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 roundabout so it will increase its connectivity to the town square.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words highway with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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