The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart represents the information about the major problems which caused less productivity in agriculture. The table demonstrates the data about how these issues influenced three nations during the 1990s.
Overall
,as it is illustrated, there were 4 main causes and all of them were approximately equal except for other reasons. In addition
, the percentage of land degradation in Europe
was larger than North
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in North
America
and Oceania
.
Initially
, over-grazing takes 35% of all reasons, which is the greater index than others. Also
, the difference between the figures of
deforestation(30%) and over-cultivation(28%) was Change preposition
for
for
a mere 2% .Change preposition
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Furthermore
, taking less than one tenth
of all numbers, the index of other problems was the smallest among the other 3 causes.
Considering the table, North Add a hyphen
one-tenth
Americas
and Change noun form
America's
Oceania
’s deforestation index were a tiny 0,2% and 1,7%, respectively, however
in Add a comma
however,
Europe
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Europe,
this
problem was the
major and the figure showed 9,8%. Correct article usage
apply
Also
, the percentage of degraded land by over-cultivation in North America
was 3,3% and in Europe
7,7%, meanwhile Oceania
had no problems with the
over-cultivation. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, over-grazing influence on three nations showed 1,5% in North America
, 5,5% in Europe
and 11,3% in Oceania
. In total only 5% of land degraded
in North Add a missing verb
was degraded
America
, however
other
two nations had the largest figures Correct article usage
the other
such
as 23% and 13% in Europe
and Oceania
,respectively.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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