The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Make compate in' where ven bv saleting and reporting the main features, and
The line chart illustrates the
consumption
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rate
of fish, lamb, Use synonyms
beef
and chicken in different Europe countries from 1979 to 2002.
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Overall
, consuming chicken increased dramatically over the entire period, and the Linking Words
consumption
of Use synonyms
beef
and lamb decreased significantly. Use synonyms
While
the fish Linking Words
consumption
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rate
remained relatively stable.
The Use synonyms
consumption
of chicken was only under 150% per Use synonyms
week
in 1979 and the ratio fluctuated before increasing significantly in 2004 to 240 per cent per Use synonyms
week
. Fish Use synonyms
consumption
remained constant with only 60 per cent each Use synonyms
week
and the Use synonyms
consumption
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rate
dropped slightly to 50% per Use synonyms
week
.
The Use synonyms
consumption
percentage of Use synonyms
beef
was the highest once nearly above 200% each Use synonyms
week
in 1979. The Use synonyms
consumption
of Use synonyms
beef
dropped slightly to 160% per Use synonyms
week
before the Use synonyms
rate
decreased dramatically in 2004 to only 120% per Use synonyms
week
. Use synonyms
While
the ratio of consumer lamb took the second place of the highest percentage of Linking Words
consumption
in 1979 with 150% per Use synonyms
week
, the ratio consistently dropped significantly year on year to just around 70% per Use synonyms
week
in 2004.Use synonyms
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