The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Make compate in' where ven bv saleting and reporting the main features, and Write at least 150 words.
The line chart illustrates the
consumption
rate
of fish, lamb, beef
and chicken in different Europe countries from 1979 to 2002.
Overall
, consuming chicken increased dramatically over the entire period, and the consumption
of beef
and lamb decreased significantly. While
the fish consumption
rate
remained relatively stable.
The consumption
of chicken was only under 150% per week
in 1979 and the ratio fluctuated before increasing significantly in 2004 to 240 per cent per week
. Fish consumption
remained constant with only 60 per cent each week
and the consumption
rate
dropped slightly to 50% per week
.
The consumption
percentage of beef
was the highest once nearly above 200% each week
in 1979. The consumption
of beef
dropped slightly to 160% per week
before the rate
decreased dramatically in 2004 to only 120% per week
. While
the ratio of consumer lamb took the second place of the highest percentage of consumption
in 1979 with 150% per week
, the ratio consistently dropped significantly year on year to just around 70% per week
in 2004.Submitted by ghazl.1998g on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, rate, beef, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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