The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.
The bar chart illustrates data concerning the prediction of young individuals for alteration in five parts of life
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communication between Correct your spelling
included
people
, quality
of food, quality
of water
, quality
of air in cities and health.
From overall
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expect
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expected
people
and quality
of water
, while
they assumed quality
of life and quality
of water
will
be worse.
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would
According to
the chart, communication between people
stood at the highest precentage
of positive perspective for improvement with 54%. Correct your spelling
percentage
Furthermore
, almost half of the people
were optimestic
about improvement in Correct your spelling
optimistic
quality
of Correct article usage
the quality
water
.
On the other hand
, seven in ten of the individuals expect adverse situation
in Fix the agreement mistake
situations
quality
of air in cities. Correct article usage
the quality
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, three fifths
of them expect Add a hyphen
three-fifths
decline
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a decline
the decline
quality
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the quality
water
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