The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse.

The bar chart illustrates data concerning the prediction of young individuals for alteration in five parts of life
incuded
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included
communication between
people
,
quality
of food,
quality
of
water
,
quality
of air in cities and health. From
overall
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perspective, the highest improvement which young adults
expect
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was for communication between
people
and
quality
of
water
,
while
they assumed
quality
of life and
quality
of
water
will
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be worse.
According to
the chart, communication between
people
stood at the highest
precentage
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percentage
of positive perspective for improvement with 54%.
Furthermore
, almost half of the
people
were
optimestic
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optimistic
about improvement in
quality
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the quality
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of
water
.
On the other hand
, seven in ten of the individuals expect adverse
situation
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situations
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in
quality
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the quality
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of air in cities.
Moreover
,
three fifths
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of them expect
decline
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a decline
the decline
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in
quality
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the quality
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of
water
.
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