The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

The supplied table indicates how many

workers

emigrated to four various countries temporarily in 2003 and 2006, and

also

the

number

of employees per 1000 in 2006. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest

number

of temporary migrant

workers

was in the US.

However

, New Zealand had the lowest

percentage

of temporary migrant job-seekers over the period. In 2006, the

number

of migrants who tend to work in America temporarily was 678,000, (which was the highest

number

of migrant

workers

over the period) just ahead of

this

number

in 2003 at 577,000 migrants.

Moreover

, the

percentage

of temporary

workers

who emigrated to the UK was 137,000 in 2003,

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266,000

workers

in 2006.

In contrast

, the

number

of temporary migrant

workers

in New Zealand in 2006 was slightly more than the

percentage

of these employees in 2003 at 87,000 and 65,000, respectively. (which was the lowest

number

of immigrants over the whole year). Whilst, the

percentage

of migrant

workers

per 1000 people was 21.1 in 2006. (which was the highest

percentage

of temporary migrants per 1000 individuals over the period).