The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.
The supplied table indicates how many
workers
emigrated to four various countries temporarily in 2003 and 2006, and also
the number
of employees per 1000 in 2006.
A glance at the graph reveals that the highest number
of temporary migrant workers
was in the US. However
, New Zealand had the lowest percentage
of temporary migrant job-seekers over the period.
In 2006, the number
of migrants who tend to work in America temporarily was 678,000, (which was the highest number
of migrant workers
over the period) just ahead of this
number
in 2003 at 577,000 migrants. Moreover
, the percentage
of temporary workers
who emigrated to the UK was 137,000 in 2003, which
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workers
in 2006.
In contrast
, the number
of temporary migrant workers
in New Zealand in 2006 was slightly more than the percentage
of these employees in 2003 at 87,000 and 65,000, respectively. (which was the lowest number
of immigrants over the whole year). Whilst, the percentage
of migrant workers
per 1000 people was 21.1 in 2006. (which was the highest percentage
of temporary migrants per 1000 individuals over the period).Submitted by TUTOO on
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