The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of
water
used for different purposes in six regions worldwide.
Overall
,
it is clear that
primary
water
is used for agricultural
purpose
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purposes
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in South
America
, Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
while
North
America
and Europe
used
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primary
water
for industrial
purpose
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purposes
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. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that over three-fourths of
water
allowcated
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allocated
allowed
for agricultural
purpose
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in South East Asian, Africa, and Central
Asia
, with 81%, 84% and 88%, respectively, followed by South
america
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, with 71%,
finally
, North
America
and Europe, with 39% and 32%, respectively.
By contrast
,
Eroupe
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Europe
used over half of
total
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water
for industrial
purpose
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purposes
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, with 53%, next is North
America
, with 48%, and other areas used only under 12% for
this
purpose
. Eventually, there are over 10% of
water
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used for domestic aim in North
America
, South
America
, and Europe
however
only under 10% of
water
were
allowcated
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allowed
for
this
purpose
in Africa, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asian
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Asia
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.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, purpose, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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