Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospitsal. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter -explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital -say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do -give details of when you would be available for this work
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I saw your advertisement on social
media app for volunteer Correct article usage
a social
work
in hospital
and I want to apply for it.
Recently, I Add an article
a hospital
the hospital
am
done with my college studies and want to spend my spare time in good Verb problem
have
work
that helps society and with a good luck
I came to know about your Remove the article
good luck
a bit of good luck
a stroke of good luck
a piece of good luck
adverstisement
. I feel so lucky that I help whether Correct your spelling
advertisement
this
help is for the patients or any work
of hospital
.
Basically, my type of unpaid Add an article
the hospital
work
is to help the patients in hospital
like helping them to walk or take care of their medicines and their physical health. I feel so lucky and blessed if Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
u
gave me Correct your spelling
you
this
position. Moreover
, I also
had a
experience in Change the article
an
healthcare
industry.
Add an article
the healthcare
Furthermore
, I am available to do
Unnecessary verb
apply
work
for
Change preposition
apply
full time
on weekdays Add a hyphen
full-time
as well as
on weekends as I am totally free from my studies and want to invest my recreational time in good work
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Coherence and Cohesion
In the letter, the ideas are generally well-organized, but try to clarify and separate different ideas or points into distinct paragraphs, such as the reasons for volunteering and your availability, to improve coherence.
Task Achievement
Avoid minor grammatical errors and typos to enhance the overall tone and professionalism of your letter.
Task Achievement
The letter addresses all parts of the task, providing reasons for wanting to volunteer, the type of work you're interested in, and your availability.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter appropriately starts with a greeting and closes professionally, maintaining a polite and respectful tone throughout.
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