The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graph on the left presents the amount of films released in 1996 and 2006,
while
the one on the right depicts the total
sales
of cinema tickets in the same time periods and same country.
Overall
, the number of films released has a generally increasing trend in all genres of films and the percentage of tickets sold in the 4 genres fluctuates in the 10-year period. In 2006, drama experienced a surge of approximately 10%
of
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releases compared to 1996 .
However
, romance has consistent numbers in both years.
In addition
, Comedy has the highest
sales
of tickets in both 1996 and 2006.
While
drama and fantasy had a rise in
sales
in 2006.
However
, fantasy has more of a dramatic increase compared to drama which only had a slight increase compared to its
sales
in 1996.
Conversely
, romance
sales
dropped to approximately 2.5% from the previous 5% in 1996.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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