The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the number of medals won by the top five countries in the summer and winter Olympics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar charts compare data about how many
medals
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5 various best countries won in not only the summer but
also
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the
winter
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Olympics.
Overall
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, it was important that the US, Russia, and Germany had positions in both types of Olympics;
additionally
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, the best country in the
winter
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was Norway, and in the summer was America. The
winter
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diagram demonstrates that Norway, the country that had a lot of
winter
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medals
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, reached roughly the same number of Gold,
Silver
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, and
Bronze
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medals
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at nearly 150. The next one was the USA;
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, it reached just over 100 gold, almost 130
silver
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, and approximately 90
Bronze
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medals
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. Germany touched the same
medals
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for
silver
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and Gold at about 90;
furthermore
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, nearly 60
Bronze
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. Russia, recording 75 golds, 50
silver
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,and roughly 60
bronze
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mealds, hit fewer
medals
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than Canada but the number of its golds is fewer than Canada's, Nealy 75 golds, 70
silver
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, and 70
bronze
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.
According to
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the Summer Olympics, the USA hit 2500, the first level;
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Russia scored just over 1750, and Germany reported just under 1750. the
last
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ones were the UK and France hit respectively approximately 800, and 600.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, winter, silver, bronze with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • medal tally
  • top-performing countries
  • notable differences
  • highlight trends
  • summer vs. winter Olympics
  • significant differences
  • overall performance
  • comparative analysis
  • dominance in events
  • athletic prowess
  • statistical comparison
  • consistency in winning
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