In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?
In some territories,
people
are encouraged to know about the past of houses
or the construction of places where they want to live. There are a couple of reasons for doing this
and there are ways to search about it which I elaborate on in the following essay.
To begin
with I assert reasons. Firstly
, people
are interested in finding out the history
of a house
or building to know this
place Correct word choice
if this
does
not Verb problem
has
commit
a Wrong verb form
committed
crime
. For example
, there is a house
in downtown Tehran near my house
where a crime
occurred and people
do not buy it and are scared about this
place. Secondly
, people
want to explore the place they wish to buy it, it is not hunted. Certain individuals believe ghosted house
creates problems for their families. For instance
, I remember that the family of my friend wanted to buy a house
but they refused because they found out the house
was ghosted.
There are some ways to explore the history
of houses
. Firstly
, people
can ask neighbourhoods of houses
since they have lived there so if occurred a crime
in the house
or the house
was ghosted, they can assist the buyer. For example
, my cousin wanted to buy a building but he regretted not buying it because the neighborhood of the house
said to him this
house
belonged to a prisoner. Secondly
, they can find the history
of construction by the government. The government of a city gather data on every house
and building in the city so they can tell buyers about the house
. For instance
, in Tehran, you can find a history
of houses
and know about the last
owner additionally
you can know whether the house
committed a crime
or not.
In conclusion, people
who are interested in the history
of the house
they live in are growing. There are reasons for this
and there are ways to research which I explained.Submitted by mkhdermani on
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Your examples are relevant and help illustrate your points regarding the reasons for researching the history of houses.
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You offer clear reasons and suggestions for how individuals might research the history of their homes.
Coherence and Cohesion
The essay is structured logically, with distinct sections addressing reasons and methods for researching house history.
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