Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some believe that the primary focus of advertisements is to increase the sale rate of unnecessary
goods
. Use synonyms
This
essay disagrees with Linking Words
this
statement and will explain that companies mainly advertise their fabrications because of the competitive atmosphere of business and to inform the public about the latest Linking Words
products
.
Business competition is the foremost reason for Use synonyms
companies
potential willingness to publicize their Change noun form
companies'
company's
goods
. To explain moreUse synonyms
about
, in the contemporary world, the number of organizations that have the same outcome fabrications is rising every day. Change preposition
apply
Therefore
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the more advertising an organization increases, the more sales and success they can expect. A recent survey in Iran, Linking Words
for instance
, shows that people are prone to purchase dairy Linking Words
products
that they have advertised on TV.
Another effective factor is that advertising is the best way to introduce new Use synonyms
products
. New Use synonyms
goods
usually offer something more attractive or more useful to us, but if customers are not aware of them, they may never have tried them. Use synonyms
Conversely
, if audiences Linking Words
became
familiar with more optional Wrong verb form
become
products
, they may become willing to buy and use them. It is shown in a new study Use synonyms
that is
published in a business journal, Linking Words
for example
, that the sale rate of new fabrications that are introduced to the public through advertising is far higher than that of ones that are not.
In conclusion, there are various reasons more important than selling more unnecessary Linking Words
goods
. Publicizing the latest Use synonyms
products
or being successful Use synonyms
to sell
more than Change preposition
in selling
competitors
enterprises are two factors that make advertising more profitable.Change noun form
competitors'
competitor's
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task response
Ensure the introduction presents a clear overview of your stance. Consider rephrasing 'increase the sale rate of unnecessary goods' for a clearer expression of the idea.
coherence and cohesion
Some of the word choices and phrases could be improved. Instead of 'the number of organizations that have the same outcome fabrications,' consider rephrasing as 'the number of companies offering similar products.'
task response
Conclude with a rephrased summary to avoid repetition. This helps in reinforcing the argument effectively.
task response
The essay successfully presents two main points to counter the given statement, outlining competitive business environment and introduction of new products as primary reasons for advertising.
coherence and cohesion
Clear and logical progression of ideas from introduction to conclusion, showcasing a coherent structure.
task response
Good use of real-world examples, such as surveys and studies, to support arguments.
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