the pie chart give information about the number of sick days the population of an imaginary country took for three different years. The line graph shown the amount of money spent on health care per person per year from 1970 until 1990.

the pie chart give information about the number of sick days the population of an imaginary country took for three different years. The line graph shown the amount of money spent on health care per person per year from 1970 until 1990.
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The pie
chart
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illustrates the proportion of the
number
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of sick
days
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in 1970,1980 and 1990 in an imaginary country.The figure is given in percentages.Another
chart
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represents how much money is spent on healthcare between 1970 and 1990.
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, it can be seen that the majority of the population had 5-8
days
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off and the amount in
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group
also
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had been rising and the amount of expenditure spent on healthcare had been increasing continually between the years given. Looking at the pie
chart
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, the group of population that had 5-8 sick
days
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took the largest proportion in both three years ,occupying 61%,64% and 68% respectively.The other two groups began at around a fifth and
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the
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fluctuated.The
number
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of people who had 4
days
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or fewer increased to a fourth and
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significantly dropped to 10%.
Whereas
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,the other group that had more than 8 sick
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declined to 11% followed by increasing back to 22%. Another
chart
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shows the amount of expense on healthcare which began at a quarter thousand
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in 1970.The
number
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had grown to just over a thousand
dollars
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in 1970 and
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had slightly increased to 1500
dollars
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in 1985. After that, the
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exponentially rose to reach the top at 4000
dollars
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in 1990.
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