The graph below shows the average house prices in 3 countries between the years 1997-2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The data provide key information about the average cost of homes in some countries in the years 1997 to 2014.
To begin
with, all the houses in the graph are
increased, especially in Unnecessary verb
apply
country
A, which grew from approximately 125 thousand dollars in 1997 to more than half a million dollars in 2003. Although
,
it is clear to the naked eye that Remove the comma
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
house's
prices declined in 2008, except the county A,Change noun form
house
it
soon recovered after that.
Another information that deserves to be mentioned is that all the countries started from approximately the same point, Correct pronoun usage
they
country
A was the highest in the beginning and remained the highest in the end even with some decreasing in the middle. In the case of country
B, it started second and it became the highest in the next year, nevertheless
, it declined again until 2014. Lastly
, in country
C there is no
Correct your spelling
not
Correct article usage
a lots
lots
of information to report but it was the lowest and still has the lowest house prices among all three countries.Correct quantifier usage
lot
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