You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart below shows average UK salaries, by city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates average payments in the United Kingdom regarding a city.
Overall
, the average salary in London was far larger
than in any other city on the list. Correct word choice
higher
Moreover
, the biggest number
of individuals that have taken part in the survey are from this
city.
Cambridge secured second place with around 29900 pounds
paid. However
, London's salary is considerably larger
. Meanwhile, both Scottish cities Glasgow and Edinburgh have pretty similar wages (26150 and 27592 Correct word choice
higher
pounds
respectively). Bristol also
features the same pay (about 27900 pounds
). In contrast
, workers in Birmingham get the least amount of money (approximately 25500 pounds
) while
in Manchester payments are slightly bigger (26000 pounds
paid).
The smallest number
of people in the sample are from Cambridge (2180 individuals). Furthermore
, the number
of people is the same in Glasgow and Bristol (3113 and 3111 respectively). Manchester has the second biggest number
of individuals taking part in this
survey (approximately 4643 workers).Submitted by leshchynser on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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