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Plagiarism in academia has become a major issue in many countries today. What are the causes and solutions.

#plagiarism #academia #countries
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 duty in
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 has been a main problem in many parts of the world . Copywriters' amounts are increasing not only in academia but
also
 in publishing departments, publishes of newspapers even in advertisements. First of all, there are many causes
of
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wide
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 extent of copywriting and there are
not any
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 restrictions for
such
 kinds of plagiarisers.Owners and authors of writings ,
poems
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 are ignorant and
inadvert
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inadvertent
in advert
 their projects unless they know their writings on other sites , they do not know to where and
whome
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who
whom
 apply.
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, my
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 author's poem is transformed
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 music and it would be on
trand
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trend
 but he did not know
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who
whom
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 and
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as a result
, he would not have an entire poem that he wrote
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in
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 a long period and with his dedication , lose his health.
Apart from
this
, most
students
 in universities, colleges and schools are getting fake grades and
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 success
due to
 their rational and weak
students
 , if strong
students
 require the answers with their force weak and intelligent ones give
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 others copywrite .
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, in my
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 there is a student who is clever . In every control
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project
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projects
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 all
students
 plagiarize from him.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
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 should ban seriously with restrictions and
high-valued
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 penalties for copywriters and even
prison
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 penalty would work out for strong ones. They have extreme fear.
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, my dad is a policeman and he is working on
such
 kinds of projects with huge penalties which he is taking for plagiarisers. In conclusion, with these
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 there would be
decrease
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amount
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 of copywriting in academic departments.
Students
get
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 fear
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 penalties and prison
penalty
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 too .
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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