The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart below gives various information about the local and international youth researchers in the Australian academies, in the year
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2001 & 2010.The total
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of researchers in 2010 is higher than
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,
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to the International
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comprised a significant increase
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14% during 2010 in the universities. In 2001, the total
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of
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were
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almost 39,000, the Australian
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and
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researchers covered the highest ratio of 44% and 43%, respectively.
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the international
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noted a small percentage with a total
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of 13% in total, 9% for the international males and only 4% for the international females. During 2010, the international
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students
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fraction significantly increased to 27%, which is about a total
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of 9000
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,
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conversely
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the local
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recorded a reduction of 14% which is about 6000
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in total, the locals still covered the biggest percentage in the two years repeatedly
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
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