The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The chart below gives various information about the local and international youth researchers in the Australian academies, in the year
of
2001 & 2010.The total Change preposition
apply
number
of researchers in 2010 is higher than 2001
, Change preposition
in 2001
in addition
to the International students
comprised a significant increase by
14% during 2010 in the universities.
In 2001, the total Change preposition
of
number
of students
were
almost 39,000, the Australian Correct subject-verb agreement
was
males
and Fix the agreement mistake
male
females
researchers covered the highest ratio of 44% and 43%, respectively.
Change the noun form
female
while
the international students
noted a small percentage with a total number
of 13% in total, 9% for the international males and only 4% for the international females.
During 2010, the international students
fraction significantly increased to 27%, which is about a total Change to a genitive case
student's
students'
number
of 9000 students
, conversely
the local Add a comma
conversely,
students
recorded a reduction of 14% which is about 6000 students
in total, the locals still covered the biggest percentage in the two years repeatedlySubmitted by Mido on
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