The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph provides information about three types of crimes
happened
in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005.
Correct pronoun usage
that happened
Overall
, it is observed mostly
Rephrase
to be
increasing
trend in all cases Correct article usage
an increasing
while
we compare their beginning and end points.
Turning to the figures, we see auto theft increased to 1.6 from 0.4 million during 25 years and then
it began to decrease to 1 million, which neither house burgling
Replace the word
burglary
,
nor street robbery reached to that number. The main similarity Remove the comma
apply
with
Change preposition
between
car
and home theft was that both of them had Add an article
the car
a car
sharp
increase.
The other two cases' starting points were close to each other, respectively 20.000 and 10.000. There Add an article
a sharp
was
fluctuations in house burgling, Change the verb form
were
whereas
the other one had steady
increase during 3 decades. In the Correct article usage
a steady
last
5 years
we notice growth only in street stealing, Add a comma
years,
nevertheless
it was the smallest figure in 2005 compared to others.Add a comma
nevertheless,
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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