Weddings are getting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary world, many couples like to have
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grand destination weddings. Certainly, some people
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to flaunt their money and rich living standards.
Personnally
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Personally
, I believe that it is a negative development and in the following
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I shall explain my reasons for
this
belief. Nowadays,
younsters
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youngsters
prefer destination marriage over
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an authantic
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authantic
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authentic
style which is sensible and meaningful. First and foremost, people have to
spent
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multiples
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time of money which they should have used
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for many
meaningfull
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meaningful
investments
for
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future
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.
For instance
,
this
extra expenditure could be used for
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payment
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their new house in which
couple
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is going to
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Moreover
, certain
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of people are taking huge debt from banks or family members for their dream weddings. After
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ceremony, couples are having
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time paying
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their debt.
Moreover
, Parents can guide their younger ones to be logical about their financial decisions. Adding to
this
, showing off their fake wealth and extravagant spending
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some special occasions
,
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can
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their future. On the
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contrary
, some individuals are born with a silver spoon in their mouth. It makes
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sense for them to make their dreams come true. They do not
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any debts from any banks or family members.
For example
, Mukesh Ambani
is
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the richest person
of
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India spent one billion dollars on his
son
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wedding which makes around less than one
percent
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of his wealth.
Everone
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should make their dreams come true but they
to
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have to work hard to make them
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To conclude
, many couples are spending
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amount
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od
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money on their weddings is a negative
delopment
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development
. Individuals should be reasonable, sensible and logical
on
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their
spendings
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.
Whereas
it is normal for
wealthier
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person to
spent
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their wealth on
such
events.
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task achievement
Try to provide more detailed explanations or examples to support your points more effectively. This will enhance the clarity and comprehensiveness of your ideas.
general language
Pay attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to improve clarity. Some errors, like 'authantic' instead of 'authentic', and 'Personnally' instead of 'Personally', can impact understanding.
coherence cohesion
Consider restructuring sentences for better logical flow and avoid repetition in expressing ideas, which will enhance coherence.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing your discussion.
task achievement
You successfully address both the reasons for expensive weddings and your perspective on whether it is a positive or negative development.
supporting points
Your use of examples, like the reference to Mukesh Ambani, effectively illustrates points about wealth and spending.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • lavish
  • extravagant
  • nuptials
  • matrimony
  • social status
  • opulence
  • milestone
  • financial leverage
  • debt
  • peer pressure
  • consumerism
  • showcase event
  • ceremonial splendor
  • bridal extravaganza
  • market forces
  • commercialization
  • budgeting
  • social comparison
  • destinal wedding
  • event planning
  • wedding vendors
  • loan
  • prestige
  • economic impact
  • mandatory spending
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