The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph shows information about the
changes
of
three metals' prices over a year in 2014. Looking from an Change preposition
in
overall
perspective, nickel
's price
underwent a significant
Correct the article-noun agreement
a significant change
significant changes
changes
compared to the data of initial
change in Correct article usage
the initial
price
.
Looking in more detail at changes
of
Change preposition
in
nickel
's and zink's price
, both illustrated a fluctuating pattern with the same trend. It is readily apparent that the difference Fix the agreement mistake
prices
of
prices for both metals experienced Change preposition
in
two
drops in June and October. In addition
, between these
Change the determiner
this two decline
these two declines
two
decline, similarily
the Correct your spelling
similarly
changes
in price
remained steady for three months, in July, Aguast
and Correct your spelling
August
september
. Despite all Change the capitalization
September
similarities
between these Correct article usage
the similarities
two
, the difference of
Change preposition
in
price
for zink increased in first
month compared with that of Change the article
the first
nickel
which significantly declined from %6 in January to %1 in March.
Moving to the changes
of
copper's Change preposition
in
price
, it is evident that after it noticeably decreased, it readily showed a considerably increasing trend which even supressed
the Correct your spelling
suppressed
two
other changes
of
metal's Change preposition
in
price
, nickel
and zink
, at %1.Correct your spelling
zinc
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, nickel, price, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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