Some people belive that because of modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills, while others think that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both views.

A certain number of individuals claim that handwriting abilities are not
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essential
due to
advencements
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advancements
in technology. They claim that writing produced by
keyboards
are
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is
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more readable
an
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and
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clear and in the majority of digital devices
people
are require
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are required
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to learn with
keyboards
,
While
others are in favour of the view that despite developments in writing,
people
should consider learning handwriting
skills
due to
developing and organizing mind,
also
it should be considered as an
art
. On the one
hand
, the advancements in technology make typing easier and faster and readable.
In other words
, texts
writen
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written
with devices using
keyboards
are
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for
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the reader
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reader
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readers
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and readers
are
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not
stuggle
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struggle
with inappropriate handwrites.
This
leads
people
to consider handwriting
skills
as an unnecessary ability.
Furthermore
, there are many devices working with
keyboards
,
therefore
,
people
do not feel any deficit for the other method.
For example
, a majority of
people
typing
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type
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text messages with their phones and on social media every day.
On the other
hand
, it is believed that writing
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hand
associated
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is associated
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with developments in
human
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the human
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brain and
assist
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them
to organize
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in organizing
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their thought more
effectivaly
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effectively
. Many
suggests
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suggest
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that by writing on paper by
hand
brain is more able to organize data.
Moreover
, there are several
barnches
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branches
in
art
which is dedicated to handwriting, which
are
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considered beauty and artistic nature of handwriting
skills
, so it
is
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still should be learned.
For instance
, in Iran,
an
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art
associated with handwriting is one of the popular branches of
art
. In conclusion,many
people
due to
the development of technology think that
write
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writing
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with
hands
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their hands
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in
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is
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not
vital
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a vital
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skills
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skill
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because they can exert typing by keyboard for
incrasing
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increasing
clarity and there is not any need in their everyday lives for it.
Although
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, some individuals
opin
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believe
that handwriting can develop
brain's
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abilities and there are branches
on
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of
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art
associated with it.
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Consider providing more specific examples to illustrate both viewpoints more clearly.
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The essay discusses both perspectives on the topic thoroughly, addressing both sides of the argument.
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Introduction and conclusion are present and effectively summarize the main points.
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There is a clear attempt to group similar ideas together within paragraphs, improving readability to some extent.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital communication
  • spell check
  • predictive text
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • cognitive benefits
  • memory retention
  • creativity
  • fine motor skills
  • hand-eye coordination
  • handwritten notes
  • cultural significance
  • historical documents
  • personal correspondence
  • self-expression
  • digital era
  • professional settings
  • collaboration tools
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