IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 5

Some people belive that because of modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills, while others think that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both views.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
A certain number of individuals claim that handwriting abilities are not
essencial
Correct your spelling
essential
due to
Linking Words
advencements
Correct your spelling
advancements
 in technology. They claim that writing produced by
keyboards
Use synonyms
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show examples
 more readable
an
Correct your spelling
and
show examples
 clear and in the majority of digital devices
people
Use synonyms
are require
Change the verb form
are required
show examples
 to learn with
keyboards
Use synonyms
 ,
While
Linking Words
 others are in favour of the view that despite developments in writing,
people
Use synonyms
 should consider learning handwriting
skills
Use synonyms
due to
Linking Words
 developing and organizing mind,
also
Linking Words
 it should be considered as an
art
Use synonyms
. On the one
hand
Use synonyms
, the advancements in technology make typing easier and faster and readable.
In other words
Linking Words
, texts
writen
Correct your spelling
written
 with devices using
keyboards
Use synonyms
 are
more clear
Correct word choice
clearer
show examples
 for
Correct article usage
the reader
show examples
reader
Fix the agreement mistake
readers
show examples
 and readers
are
Verb problem
do
show examples
 not
stuggle
Correct your spelling
struggle
 with inappropriate handwrites.
This
Linking Words
 leads
people
Use synonyms
 to consider handwriting
skills
Use synonyms
 as an unnecessary ability.
Furthermore
Linking Words
, there are many devices working with
keyboards
Use synonyms
,
therefore
Linking Words
,
people
Use synonyms
 do not feel any deficit for the other method.
For example
Linking Words
, a majority of
people
Use synonyms
typing
Wrong verb form
type
show examples
 text messages with their phones and on social media every day.
On the other
Linking Words
hand
Use synonyms
, it is believed that writing
with
Change preposition
by
show examples
hand
Use synonyms
associated
Add a missing verb
is associated
show examples
 with developments in
human
Add an article
the human
show examples
 brain and
assist
Correct subject-verb agreement
assists
show examples
 them
to organize
Change preposition
in organizing
show examples
 their thought more
effectivaly
Correct your spelling
effectively
. Many
suggests
Change the verb form
suggest
show examples
 that by writing on paper by
hand
Use synonyms
 brain is more able to organize data.
Moreover
Linking Words
, there are several
barnches
Correct your spelling
branches
 in
art
Use synonyms
 which is dedicated to handwriting, which
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show examples
 considered beauty and artistic nature of handwriting
skills
Use synonyms
, so it
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
still should be learned.
For instance
Linking Words
, in Iran,
an
Remove the article
apply
show examples
art
Use synonyms
 associated with handwriting is one of the popular branches of
art
Use synonyms
. In conclusion,many
people
Use synonyms
due to
Linking Words
 the development of technology think that
write
Wrong verb form
writing
show examples
 with
hands
Correct pronoun usage
their hands
show examples
in
Correct your spelling
is
show examples
 not
vital
Correct article usage
a vital
show examples
Use synonyms
skills
Fix the agreement mistake
skill
show examples
 because they can exert typing by keyboard for
incrasing
Correct your spelling
increasing
 clarity and there is not any need in their everyday lives for it.
Linking Words
Although
Correct word choice
However
show examples
, some individuals
opin
Correct your spelling
believe
 that handwriting can develop
brain's
Correct article usage
the brain's
show examples
 abilities and there are branches
on
Change preposition
of
show examples
art
Use synonyms
 associated with it.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task achievement
Consider providing more specific examples to illustrate both viewpoints more clearly.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that the main points in your essay are consistently supported with logical arguments.
coherence cohesion
Enhance the coherence of your arguments by connecting ideas more clearly between sentences and paragraphs.
task achievement
The essay discusses both perspectives on the topic thoroughly, addressing both sides of the argument.
coherence cohesion
Introduction and conclusion are present and effectively summarize the main points.
coherence cohesion
There is a clear attempt to group similar ideas together within paragraphs, improving readability to some extent.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • digital communication
  • spell check
  • predictive text
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • cognitive benefits
  • memory retention
  • creativity
  • fine motor skills
  • hand-eye coordination
  • handwritten notes
  • cultural significance
  • historical documents
  • personal correspondence
  • self-expression
  • digital era
  • professional settings
  • collaboration tools
What to do next:
Look at other essays: