The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The data displays the trends in
proportion
of Add an article
the proportion
houseworks
by washing Correct your spelling
housework
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
and
in a certain nation and the number of hours Correct word choice
apply
doing
households from 1920 to 2019.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, there were increases using three electrical appliances during the entire period. Refrigerator
showed a significant uprising among them, and there was a decrease Fix the agreement mistake
Refrigerators
of
the number of hours Change preposition
in
doing
washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning.
In Verb problem
spent
first
line chart, washing Correct article usage
the first
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
Correct word choice
and vacuum
cleaner
started with 40%, 30%,Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
0
% in 1920, respectively. In Correct word choice
and 0
first
40 years, the consumption of Correct article usage
the first
refrigerator
rocketed to 90% in 1960 Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
while
the others showed a gradually
increase. The percentage of Change the adverb
gradual
refrigerator
was Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
consistantly
the highest from 1960, with 90%, Correct your spelling
consistently
however
, that of vacuum
cleaner
catched it with 100% in 2000. Both Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vacuum
cleaner
Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
was
the highest after 2000.
In the second graph, there was a downward trend. In 1920, the number of hours for washing clothes, preparing meals, and cleaning was 50. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, it decreased dramatically from 50 to 20, in 1920 and 1960, respectively. After 1960, it showed a gradually
decrease during the entire period.Change the adverb
gradual
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