It is often clamied that women have achieved greater freedom and have access to the same oppurtunities as men.The pie charts below show some employment patterns in Korea.

The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of current job positions in Korea comparing males and females.

Overall

,it can be seen that the majority of males are employed as managerial and professional

whereas

,females have the most job positions as other manual.

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with,looking at the first pie chart,

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manual is the most popular occupation among female employees followed closely by clerical and related which are 32% and 30% respectively.Other non-manual taking part as 11%

whereas

,The proportion of managerial and professional doubled to 22%.The others are less than 5% which are craft or similar and general labourers.

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,The percentage of male employees shows a different pattern.Males are more capable of being managerial and professional which is more than females by 16%.Other

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popular being the second most applied career,occupying 28%.Followed closely by craft or similar which is 21%.The other jobs are less than 10% which are other non-manual and clerical and related ,and

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, general labourers

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the lowest among both two groups.