Accessing the new in Canada and Australia The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia

Accessing the new in Canada and Australia 

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia
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various ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.
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, it can be clearly seen that in Canada the greatest figure was about TV ,
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in Australia many people use news online. In Australia, the highest percentage is 52% from online resources,
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2% from unknown materials services and radio. The figure
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print is higher than
radio
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%.
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37% of news are taken is from TV programs. Regarding
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Canada, the highest percentage is 40% from TV,
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the lowest 3% is about not specified. In comparison with not specified resources, radio is higher
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4%.It has been doubled in terms of print.
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of 36%
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resources is equal to
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