Accessing the new in Canada and Australia The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia
The pie charts
compares
various ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.
Change the verb form
compare
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in Canada the greatest figure was about TV ,while
in Australia many people use news online.
In Australia, the highest percentage is 52% from online resources, while
the lowest are
2% from unknown materials services and radio. The figure Change the verb form
is
of
print is higher than Change preposition
for
radio
forCorrect pronoun usage
that radio
5
%.Change preposition
at 5
Meanwhile
37% of news are taken is from TV programs.
Regarding Add a comma
Meanwhile,
to
Canada, the highest percentage is 40% from TV, Remove the preposition
apply
whereas
the lowest 3% is about not specified. In comparison with not specified resources, radio is higher for
4%.It has been doubled in terms of print. Change preposition
at
Proportion
of 36% Add an article
The proportion
online
resources is equal toChange preposition
of online
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