Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 2

The map shows the geographical location of

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Brandfield

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where a proposal has arisen to construct a new shopping mall in two possible areas

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, the

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of Brandfield has a golf course, park,

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, housing and industrial estates

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a railroad, a river and a prominent highway. The

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planners are still in a dilemma with the exact location of the shopping complex as the proposed sites have their own features.

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with, the first selected place, S1 is surrounded by the

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in the south, a river in the east and a housing estate in the northwest direction. Here, the river, the railway and the main road have created a triangle and the

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place is,

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, at the

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triangle which will give an enormous opportunity to the future shoppers to transport easily.

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, the other place addressed as S2, is somehow, situated at the edge of the town which makes it a bit isolated where the railroad and the highway are at a permissible distance. But the fact is that

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S2 is somehow much distant from the

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and the housing estate compared to the S1 which may discourage the people from shopping regularly as S1 seems to be more accessible and comfortable to the local people.