The diagrams below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates how the model of

transportation

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changed from 1950 to 1990 by tourists in European

country

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countries

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the beginning,

travellers

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in European

country were

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mostly travelled

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their

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foots

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, but in the

last

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year

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cars

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most

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popular. In 1950, just around 40% of tourists

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travelled

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their

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and bikes were their second priority around 27%. But in 1970,

travellers

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mainly used

bus

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as a

transportation

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around 26% and 25% by cars.

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, after that in 1990, people highly used

car

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as a travel partner

about

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39%.

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car

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was an unpopular

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among

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travellers

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in the first year, 5% of people travelled by

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. In the

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year, those who travelled via

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were the lowest approximately 5% and

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those by

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were 6%.

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, in 1970,

travellers

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chosen

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bikes and by foot as

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around

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20% to 18% respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, travellers with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

151 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

changes
modes of transport
travellers
European country
1950
1990
summarise
main features
comparisons
popularity
time periods
bicycle
walking
car
public transportation
motorcycle
increased significantly
preferred mode of transport
stability
slight increase

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