The diagrams below shows changes in modes of transport chosen by travellers in European country from 1950 to 1990. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates how the model of
transportation
had
changed from 1950 to 1990 by tourists in European Unnecessary verb
apply
country
.
Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Overall
, at
the beginning, Change the preposition
in
travellers
in European country were
mostly travelled Wrong verb form
countries
by
Change preposition
on
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
foots
, but in the Fix the agreement mistake
foot
last
year
cars Add a comma
year,
became
Wrong verb form
have become
most
popular.
In 1950, just around 40% of tourists Correct article usage
the most
were
travelled Unnecessary verb
apply
by
Change preposition
on
their
Correct pronoun usage
apply
foots
and bikes were their second priority around 27%. But in 1970, Fix the agreement mistake
foot
travellers
mainly used bus
as a Add an article
the bus
transportation
around 26% and 25% by cars. Although
, after that in 1990, people highly used Correct word choice
However
car
as a travel partner Fix the agreement mistake
cars
about
39%.
Change preposition
by about
On the other hand
, car
was an unpopular Add an article
the car
transportation
among the
Correct article usage
apply
travellers
in the first year, 5% of people travelled by cars
. In the Fix the agreement mistake
car
last
year, those who travelled via bikes
were the lowest approximately 5% and Fix the agreement mistake
bike
by
Correct pronoun usage
those by
foots
were 6%. Fix the agreement mistake
foot
Nevertheless
, in 1970, travellers
chosen
bikes and by foot as Wrong verb form
chose
transportation
around
20% to 18% respectively.Change preposition
by around
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, travellers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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