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The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.

The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.
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The chart illustrates the
overall
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 count of the vehicles owned by the
people
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 in China.
Overall
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, looking at the chart we can notice a trend throughout the periods that more and more
people
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 are becoming
car
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owners
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. In the year 1987, out of a thousand Chinese
people
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, only less than 50 of them own a
car
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.
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number
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 ,
however
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, did not stay the same as only 2 years later, in 1989, the
number
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 of
car
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owners
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 more than doubled.
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 pattern of more
people
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 being
car
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owners
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 continues into the 1990s albeit at a smaller rate. From 1989 to 1993 the
number
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 goes from just above 50 to about a hundred. Another sharp increase can be seen from the end of 1993 to 1999. In
this
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 period,
First,
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the total
number
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 of vehicles grows by about 100 per cent from 100 to 200. These significant jumps become a common tendency in the years 1997 and 1999 When
in
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a thousand
people
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 about 400 of them are vehicle
owners
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, just short of the 50 per cent mark.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, car, owners, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • comparative data
  • vehicle ownership
  • per 1000 people
  • economic growth
  • rising income
  • year-on-year increase
  • significant jumps
  • data points
  • urbanization
  • industrialization
  • infrastructural impact
  • environmental impact
  • plateau
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