The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.

The bar chart compares the total number of vehicles per one thousand people in China who owns a car in the years 1987 to 1999.
The chart illustrates the
overall
count of the vehicles owned by the
people
in China.
Overall
, looking at the chart we can notice a trend throughout the periods that more and more
people
are becoming
car
owners
. In the year 1987, out of a thousand Chinese
people
, only less than 50 of them own a
car
.
This
number
,
however
, did not stay the same as only 2 years later, in 1989, the
number
of
car
owners
more than doubled.
This
pattern of more
people
being
car
owners
continues into the 1990s albeit at a smaller rate. From 1989 to 1993 the
number
goes from just above 50 to about a hundred. Another sharp increase can be seen from the end of 1993 to 1999. In
this
period,
First,
the total
number
of vehicles grows by about 100 per cent from 100 to 200. These significant jumps become a common tendency in the years 1997 and 1999 When
in
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a thousand
people
about 400 of them are vehicle
owners
, just short of the 50 per cent mark.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, car, owners, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • comparative data
  • vehicle ownership
  • per 1000 people
  • economic growth
  • rising income
  • year-on-year increase
  • significant jumps
  • data points
  • urbanization
  • industrialization
  • infrastructural impact
  • environmental impact
  • plateau
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