The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008.

The pie chart shows the percentage of women in poverty and the bar chart shows poverty rates by sex and age. They are from the United States in 2008.
The provided pie
chart
gives data on the
percentage
of
females
in
poverty
,
while
the bar
chart
illustrates the
percentage
of people who lived in
poverty
divided by age and sex. Both statistics are from the USA in 2008. In brief, it is evident that the most significant
percentage
of
women
living in
poverty
is single
females
with no dependent
children
,
while
the number of married
women
with no independent
children
is the lowest. The bar
chart
shows that the highest
percentage
of both men and
women
under the age of 5 live in
poverty
and these two categories are almost equal. It is clearly shown in the pie
chart
that 54% of single
females
with no dependent
children
lived in
poverty
in the USA in 2008.
However
, only 8% of
females
with independent
children
, but who were married, were living in
poverty
in the same year and country. Regarding the bar
chart
, more than 20% of men and
women
under the age of 5 lived in
poverty
.
On the other hand
, only about 5% of men aged 75 and older were in
this
income category,
whereas
women
between 45 and 55 years, the
percentage
of which were living in
poverty
in the USA in 2008, was around 7%.
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