The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
The provided maps illustrate the transformation of the Ryemouth
village
over the last
29 years.
In brief, it is evident that the village
underwent fundamental development, which includes such
changes as the addition of, sports facilities, new apartments and housing constructions. However
, a forest park, fishing market, shop and a fishing port were totally removed.
The most significant changes involve setting up such
sports facilities as two tennis courts and a golf field in the northeast of the village
. When it comes to the northwestern side of Ryemouth, it is easy to notice that a housing expansion has occurred. Additionally
, the road leading to the new housing buildings was slightly extended.
Furthermore
, the major changes which occurred in the southern part of the village
include the construction of a new restaurant in the place where a shop was located previously, removing both the fishing port and fish market and the building of 4 new apartments facing the sea in its place.
Moreover
, the forest park was totally cut down in the east of the village
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