The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides data concerning the amount of
fish
getting caught and imported into Perth, Australia in a certain period of time.
Overall
, the
number
of local
fish
is always more than the imports by a larger margin and the total
number
of
fish
increases until the
year
2008 which is a peak and after
that
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it starts to dwindle slowly. From the table we can gather that in the
year
2004 there is a huge gap between the
amount
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number
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of local catches and imports of fresh
fish
with the former being more than six times the
number
of the latter.
This
is a recurring pattern as we can notice the
number
of local catches rising at a higher rate than the imports and
this
trend persists up until the
year
2009. In the
year
2008, 8136 metrics of fresh
fish
were caught locally which dwarfs the mere 717
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metric
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tons of imported
fish
in contrast
. In the
year
2009,
however
, there was a shift and it is the same
year
the local
fish
alongside the total
number
of
fish
sees
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a decrease.
This
course remains true for all the remaining years and the amount of total
fish
starts to decline at a somewhat slow rate. In the
year
2014, the region of Perth got only 5814 tons of
fish
. A
number
that
although
is still more than it was in the
year
2004, has lessened significantly from its peak in 2008.
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