Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Owning to an increasing number

individuals

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assume that government funding should

expense

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on

railways

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rather than roads.

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statement, I believe that it would lead to certain challenges,

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lower

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the number of customers for taxi services. On the one hand, the major advantage of

spend

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money on train systems is it will reduce air pollution. Private

vehicle

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vehicles

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have exhaust pipes that release smoke into the air and if there are a lot of them the toxins will accumulate in the atmosphere .

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contribute

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to climate change

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as global warming.

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, it can alleviate traffic congestion. By

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railways

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, pupils would turn to

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them more than

automobile

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automobiles

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.

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would result in faster transportation and

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reduce accident rates.

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, the notable effect of investment more

railways

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could be a reduction in demand for taxi services. As more people choose to use trains for their daily transportation, taxi

driver

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drivers

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may experience a decrease in customers, leading to lower income for those who rely on

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business. Another impact is the inconvenience caused by neglected roads. If funding is primarily directed towards

railways

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, the maintenance and improvement of road infrastructure may suffer.

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, some individuals

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need to travel to rural

area

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may experience unsafe driving conditions.

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up

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everything that has been started so far, it is considered that it can alleviate climate

changes

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and tackle

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congestion, but there will be lower income in some jobs and some inconvenience.

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actively demonstrates that

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should

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more money on

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but that does not mean they should not.