The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of different
electricity
sources in Ireland
while
the
table
displays the share of
electricity
usage by activities. It can clearly be seen from the pie graph that coal is the main source of
electricity
whereas
the
table
shows that heating is the main activity for
electricity
consumption. The
table
displays four sources of
electricty
Correct your spelling
electricity
, with coal as the main contributor with 45%.
While
gas is the second highest with 35%, wind and solar contribute the same percentage at 10%. The
table
illustrates that
from
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of
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five
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the five
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activities that consume
electricity
, heating is the biggest with 55%. After that, lighting comes in second with 20%
and
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followed by kitchen appliances at 15%. Consumer electronics and phone charging share the same with 5%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, table with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "displays" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • fossil fuels
  • renewable energy
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
  • residential sector
  • industrial sector
  • commercial sector
  • trends
  • changes over time
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