The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the percentage of different
electricity
sources in Ireland while
the table
displays the share of electricity
usage by activities.
It can clearly be seen from the pie graph that coal is the main source of electricity
whereas
the table
shows that heating is the main activity for electricity
consumption.
The table
displays four sources of electricty
, with coal as the main contributor with 45%. Correct your spelling
electricity
While
gas is the second highest with 35%, wind and solar contribute the same percentage at 10%.
The table
illustrates that from
Change preposition
of
five
activities that consume Correct article usage
the five
electricity
, heating is the biggest with 55%. After that, lighting comes in second with 20% and
followed by kitchen appliances at 15%. Consumer electronics and phone charging share the same with 5%.Correct word choice
apply
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