The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009.

Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table provides information on the percentages of students' participation in four secondary
schools
kinds- Specialist
Schools
, Grammar
Schools
, Voluntary-controlled
Schools
, and Community
Schools
- from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
, aside from community
schools
, all secondary education centres saw a modest decrease in terms of the pupils attending rates over the period given. Looking in more detail, the proportion of the pupil's attendance in Voluntary-controlled
Schools
peaked at 52% in 2000, making it the highest figure.
However
,
this
pattern experienced a significant decline by 38% in 2005.
Additionally
, the ratio of the student's participation in Grammar
schools
commenced at 24% in 2000, followed by a minor drop by 2005.
Furthermore
, the
student's
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attendance rate in Voluntary-controlled
Schools
comprised 20% in 2009,
whereas
this
figure for grammar
schools
was accustomed to approximately 12%. Regarding the remaining types, the percentages of student participation in both Specialist
Schools
and Community
Schools
began at the same level, with 12%.
In addition
,
this
pattern for Specialist
Schools
observed a slight decline throughout the period, standing at 10%.
By contrast
, the pupil's presence rate increased 5 times by roughly 58%.
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