The table shows the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table provides information on the percentages of students' participation in four secondary

schools

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kinds- Specialist

Schools

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, Grammar

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, Voluntary-controlled

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, and Community

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- from 2000 to 2009.

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, aside from community

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, all secondary education centres saw a modest decrease in terms of the pupils attending rates over the period given. Looking in more detail, the proportion of the pupil's attendance in Voluntary-controlled

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peaked at 52% in 2000, making it the highest figure.

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pattern experienced a significant decline by 38% in 2005.

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, the ratio of the student's participation in Grammar

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commenced at 24% in 2000, followed by a minor drop by 2005.

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, the

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attendance rate in Voluntary-controlled

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comprised 20% in 2009,

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figure for grammar

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was accustomed to approximately 12%. Regarding the remaining types, the percentages of student participation in both Specialist

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and Community

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began at the same level, with 12%.

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this

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pattern for Specialist

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observed a slight decline throughout the period, standing at 10%.

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, the pupil's presence rate increased 5 times by roughly 58%.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

183 words

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