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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002.
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The chart below illustrates the total number of
minutes
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 of telephone calls in
UK
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the UK
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, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
Overall
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, the chart demonstrates the total number of
minutes
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 in billions, UK telephone calls, by category, 1995-2002, and call type consists: local — fixed
line
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, National and International — fixed
line
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,
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and Mobiles
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Mobiles
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mobile
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 (all calls).
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, the highest category occupied Local — fixed
line
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 in 1999, National and International — fixed
line
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 had half of 100,
Mobiles
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 (all calls) had nearby 12 or 13
minutes
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,
whereas
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 in 1995 Local fixed
line
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 had 71
minutes
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, National and International fixed
line
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 had 37
minutes
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,
Mobiles
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 (all calls) had just 2
minutes
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.
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, in 1996 local fixed
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line
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lines
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rise
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rose
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 to approximately 80, national and international fixed
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line
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lines
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grow
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grew
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 to exactly 40,
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mobiles
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and mobiles
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climb
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climbed
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 to 5. In 1997 local fixed
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line
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lines
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 had 85
minutes
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, national and international had 45,
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mobiles
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and mobiles
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 had 7. In 1998 local fixed
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line
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lines
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surge
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surged
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 to almost 90, national and international had 48,
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mobiles
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and mobiles
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 had just 9, but starting
at
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in
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 2000 local fixed
line
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 and national and international fixed
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line
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lines
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 declined, because local had 85, national decreased to 55, but
mobiles
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 started risen to 23. In 2001 local had 78 and national had 60, when
mobiles
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 had 39, but in 2002
mobiles
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 had 46,
although
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 local had 71 and national just 61.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, line, mobiles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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