Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

Tourism

is booming in many countries. Some believe that it brings great benefits to society as it boosts the

economy

and creates job

opportunities

.

While some

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others argue that the tourist

industry

may potentially harm the environment as it generates much more carbon footprint than the earth

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handle in

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.

While

I believe

tourism

brings both

opportunities

and challenges in contemporary society.

Tourism

brings many advantages in boosting the

economy

, preservation of cultural heritages and encouraging the development of the entertainment

industry

. In many countries,

tourism

is one of the most important industries that contributes the economic growth. It boosts the

economy

in retail, infrastructure,

hospitality

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and hospitality

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and creates job

opportunities

for many people.

For example

, in Thailand, New Zealand and

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Singapore,

tourism

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is the

the

main engine for GDP growth, which contributes substantial tax revenue for the government, which in turn is used for local development and investment.

In addition

, the encouragement of

tourist

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industry

may help local people to better preserve

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cultural heritages. Income from tourists can be used for the maintenance of ancient buildings, arts and museums.

As a result

, local people could take

this

opportunity to preserve

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ancient

buildings and paintings, so as to understand their own culture deeply and comprehensively. On the flip side, the opponents argue that travel causes environmental damage. Public transportation

such

as airlines, trains and buses are the main sources of carbon footprint, which may cause environmental degradation and harm the natural habitats.

For example

, the Great Barrier Reef in Australia is overly reliant on

tourism

, with a large influx of visitors leading to damage to the local ecological environment., the biodiversity decreased, and a lot of marine creatures suffer.

Moreover

, over-relay on

tourism

leads to economic vulnerability. An economic downturn is likely to occur

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countries that have simple structure

economy

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such

as those experienced during the COVID pandemic.

Overall

,

tourism

has advantages in stimulating economic growth and creating job

opportunities

,

it

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but it

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also

poses challenges in degrading the environment and

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causes

uncertainty to the

economy

. Striking the balance between the tourist

industry

and the structure of the

economy

will lead to a brighter future for a healthy economic structure.