Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. •In your letter: Give a brief description of the business •Mention what you’d like to be there on the website. •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.
Hey Rahul,
How I just started my tiffin service in my town only for
you'r
doingCorrect your spelling
your
!
Hope so you are doing great . I need a little Change the punctuation
?
favor
from you ,actuallyChange the spelling
favour
Add a comma
,
students
so they can get affordable rates.
So,last
year me
and my mom came Change the pronoun
I
with
Change preposition
up with
an
idea of Correct article usage
the
this
service because it's really hard for students
to do cooking
Wrong verb form
cook
while
taking
studying.
Can you Verb problem
apply
plese
make a website for me so I can reach more and more Correct your spelling
please
students
in our area .
Change the punctuation
?
In
the Change preposition
On
website
I need my number and address so they can contact me without any hustle. Add a comma
website,
Also
I would like to Add a comma
Also,
hae
tiffin prices written over there.
Correct your spelling
have
Also
If you can add some photos in
it that would be a Change preposition
to
gamechanger
. You know as well too how visual Correct your spelling
game-changer
affects
get the attraction . I am thinking Replace the word
effects
to add
some Change preposition
of adding
picutres
of the cuisines we are going to make . Give Correct your spelling
pictures
me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
little assistance to me and students
.
Regard's
JattCorrect article usage
the students
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structure
Try to break down ideas into clear paragraphs to enhance readability. Each paragraph should cover a single main point.
accuracy
Avoid minor inaccuracies, such as spelling mistakes ('how you'r doing'), and ensure consistent use of capitalization and punctuation ('Regard's' should be 'Regards').
content
You have successfully communicated the task achievement by including the necessary details about your business, what you want on the website, and the use of images.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for addressing a friend.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,