Write a letter to a friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. •In your letter: Give a brief description of the business •Mention what you’d like to be there on the website. •Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Hey Rahul, How
you'r
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your
doing
!
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Hope so you are doing great . I need a little
favor
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from you ,actually
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I just started my tiffin service in my town only for
students
so they can get affordable rates. So,
last
year
me
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and my mom came
with
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up with
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an
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idea of
this
service because it's really hard for
students
to
do cooking
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while
taking
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studying. Can you
plese
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please
make a website for me so I can reach more and more
students
in our area
.
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In
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the
website
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website,
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I need my number and address so they can contact me without any hustle.
Also
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I would like to
hae
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have
tiffin prices written over there.
Also
If you can add some photos
in
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it that would be a
gamechanger
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. You know as well too how visual
affects
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get the attraction . I am thinking
to add
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of adding
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some
picutres
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pictures
of the cuisines we are going to make . Give
me
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this
little assistance to me and
students
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. Regard's Jatt
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structure
Try to break down ideas into clear paragraphs to enhance readability. Each paragraph should cover a single main point.
accuracy
Avoid minor inaccuracies, such as spelling mistakes ('how you'r doing'), and ensure consistent use of capitalization and punctuation ('Regard's' should be 'Regards').
content
You have successfully communicated the task achievement by including the necessary details about your business, what you want on the website, and the use of images.
tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for addressing a friend.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • develop a website
  • business description
  • key features
  • user-friendly
  • navigation
  • professional design
  • brand image
  • visual impact
  • high-quality images
  • gallery or slider
  • testimonials
  • case studies
  • content style
  • tone
  • brand's voice
  • target audience
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