The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide emissions per person in countries namely the United
Kingdom
, Sweden
, Italy and Portugal through 40 years from 1967 to 2007.
As can be seen, the CO2 polluted
per person in each country has Replace the word
pollution
trend
to go up Wrong verb form
trended
slighly
in Italy and Portugal, Correct your spelling
slightly
while
going down in the United Kingdom
and Sweden
. In
the end of the period, the United Change the preposition
At
Kingdom
has
the highest tonnes of CO2 emissions, Wrong verb form
had
Sweden
and Portugal Correct word choice
and Sweden
have
the lowest.
From 1967 to 1977, the tonne of CO2 emissions in the United Wrong verb form
had
Kingdom
remains
Wrong verb form
remained
stabl
Correct your spelling
stable
while
Sweden
, Italy and PortugalSubmitted by aesacademyforenglishstudy on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kingdom, sweden with synonyms.
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