The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The provided line graph illustrates the amount of carbon dioxide emissions per person in countries namely the United
Kingdom
,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal through 40 years from 1967 to 2007. As can be seen, the CO2
polluted
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pollution
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per person in each country has
trend
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trended
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to go up
slighly
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slightly
in Italy and Portugal,
while
going down in the United
Kingdom
and
Sweden
.
In
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At
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the end of the period, the United
Kingdom
has
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had
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the highest tonnes of CO2 emissions,
Sweden
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and Sweden
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and Portugal
have
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had
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the lowest. From 1967 to 1977, the tonne of CO2 emissions in the United
Kingdom
remains
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remained
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stabl
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stable
while
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal
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