The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The given information illustrates the police
budget
in a region in Britain between 2017 to
2018. The table Correct word choice
and
demostrates
the sources of money and the pie charts depict how the Correct your spelling
demonstrates
mony
was spent.
Correct your spelling
money
Overall
, the whole budget
was higher in 2017, compared to that of in
2018. Change preposition
apply
While
national
Correct article usage
the national
governement
had the biggest contribution, the other sources had the lowest combination during Correct your spelling
government
governments
this
period.
Regarding to table, in 2017, national
government was 175.5 Add an article
the national
m
and there was a slight increase in its budget
in the next year by 2.8 m
. Local taxes saw a dramatic rise in its budget
in 2018, which increased from 91.2 m
to 102.3 m
. There were
less Change the verb form
was
budget
in other sources which was lass
than 40m in both years.
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less
According to
the pie charts, in both years money spent
on salaries more than Add a missing verb
was spent
other
Change preposition
in other
catagories
75% and 69% respectively. Correct your spelling
categories
Bulding
and transport spending ranked the second stage in these years with the same amount Correct your spelling
Building
to
17%. In the first year, expenditure Change preposition
of
of
technology usage was 8%, Change preposition
on
while
it had a slight rise by
7% more Change preposition
of
at the end
of the period.Submitted by sahar.moti1994 on
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