The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table details the number of local and international
research
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students
enrolled in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010, Use synonyms
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the pie charts illustrate the Linking Words
gender
distribution within these groups.
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Overall
, there was a notable increase in the total Linking Words
research
student population, with domestic Use synonyms
students
remaining the majority, albeit their proportional share declined as international enrollments rose. Use synonyms
Additionally
, the Linking Words
gender
composition remained fairly balanced over the period.
In 2001, there were 33,657 local Use synonyms
students
and 5,192 international Use synonyms
students
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totaling
38,849. By 2010, the number of domestic Change the spelling
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students
had increased slightly to 39,488, Use synonyms
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international student numbers had nearly tripled to 14,593, raising the total to 54,081.
Regarding Linking Words
gender
distribution, domestic Use synonyms
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represented 87% of the Use synonyms
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population in 2001, with male and female percentages almost equal. International Use synonyms
students
accounted for the remaining 13%, with 9% male and 4% female. By 2010, domestic Use synonyms
students
comprised 73% of the total, with a slight Use synonyms
gender
disparity emerging: males constituted 38%, and females 35%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the proportion of international Linking Words
research
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students
doubled to 27%, with female Use synonyms
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(15%) surpassing their male counterparts (12%).Use synonyms
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