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The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and the chart below show the number of students choosing different kinds of courses in a university in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the preferences of male and female
students
 for six different courses at a university in 2012.
Overall
, the data reveals that more
men
 enrolled in engineering, science, and mathematics,
whereas
women
 dominated in social
sciences
, health, and humanities. Notably, social
sciences
 attracted the highest number of
students
overall
,
while
 agriculture was the only subject with an equal gender split. In terms of total enrollment, social
sciences
 were the most popular, with 7,000
students
, more than double the number registered in engineering. Health, humanities, science, and mathematics followed, each attracting between 2,000 and 2,300
students
. Agriculture,
on the other hand
, had the fewest
students
, with around 400 enrollees. Looking at gender distribution, 4,000
women
 opted for social
sciences
, surpassing the 3,000
men
 in the same field.
Similarly
,
women
 outnumbered
men
 in health and humanities, with approximately 1,500 female
students
 compared to around 1,000 males.
In contrast
, male
students
 were predominant in engineering, science, and mathematics, where their numbers ranged from 1,100 to 2,000, significantly higher than the 800 to 1,000 female
students
 in these courses. Agriculture,
however
, attracted an equal number of
men
 and
women
, at roughly 200 each.
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