The table below gives information about the average number of servings of ice cream sold each day in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given table illustrates the average daily
sales
of ice cream servings across two distinct years.
First,
on one
hand, the average Correct article usage
the one
sales
of hot coffee were approximately 80 in winter
and 30 in summer
. But
Correct word choice
On
on the other hand
, iced coffee sales
in hot weather were 40, and in cold weather
they dropped to zero. Same with broth Add a comma
weather,
sales
; the purchases were 50 in winter
and dropped to 25 in summer
. It is clear individuals prefer hot coffee in winter
to soup.
Second,
ice cream purchases in summer
were higher than winter
sales
by 10%.
Finally
, the sales
of
Change preposition
apply
sales
in both session winter
and summer
did not change; it was about 25 purchases.Submitted by roof.al1418 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, winter, summer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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